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Archive for November, 2007

Electric Trash

Lollipop Land

Candy From Strangers

Critique:
“Candy From Strangers” is a neat photo because the colors have been desaturated and the placement of the lollipops is quite interesting. If I could, I would remove the edges of empty space. In “Lollipop Land” the super intense colors of the image are eye bleedingly good.   “Electric Trash” [...]

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Inconspicuous Oxide

Curiousity Isn’t Just For Cats

A Real Sport

 Critique:
For “A Real Sport”, the intense red of the fuzeball player attracts your eye, and leads it down the line of players. The darkness of the image helps to solidify the power of the reds as well. If I could, I would remove the red in the right corner. In [...]

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Pastel In Vitro

Judas Kiss

Wrong Way

Critique:
The main focus of all three images is the graffiti on the wall. The last image successfully uses the arrow as a focal point and the bright red contrasts with the bland white and black. The second image is just full of graffiti, you can barely see the wall. The crowded [...]

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Client Job 2

 My client is Ms. Swiderski.  The second job she has asked me to do is design a tryout flyer for Softball. I designed 3 examples for my client to choose from and they chose these two:
      
                                                   
                                          
My client requested that I switch the “start” to “begins”, but other than that she was happy with the [...]

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Client Job 1

 For the first client job, my client and I had a serious communication problem, which has now been amended (thankfully), and I was also sick for about a week, so I was very late in doing my job, and I didn’t handle my time very well. My client had me design flyers for pre-season softball [...]

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